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THE DARKNESS second submition by justblah THE DARKNESS second submition by justblah
SO!

here is my second attempt.

completely hand painted ( watercolors and inks)

with the little Photoshopping here and there (lights mainly)


first thing you will notice compared to my last submission (which i think is shit now :P)
is that this time, i stuck to the script, and used only 3 panels.

secondly, i spent alot more time with the paint. i wish that last panel was a splash page cuz i actually did it separately on A3.

spent about 1-2 hours on the first panel (perspective is a bitch)
1 hour on the 2nd
and 3 on the last.

i tried to go from blue/green to red as you travel down the page, as things get more hectic for our fellow Jackie, to kinda help with the story telling.

i way prefer the layout in this...


also, just based of what i read about that darkling, is that he helps jackie out alot during the game, so he musta been the darkling they wanted in this, cuz all ive seen so far are people kinda doing their own thing with the darklings.


i like this page. still has the gritt i had in the previous submition, but its much, much cleaner!

subition by Justin Gerardin (me) ( just incase the name would be needed haha)

if i have the time, ill do a third one.

ill probably redo the 2nd panel. i dunno. its bothering me haha


(again....HOLLY FUCK I LOVE MY LAST PANEL :) )


check out my third entry: i edited the second panel :)

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:iconanotherrandomaccount:
yeah! This one is way better, except for -as you said- the second panel: Red is not the right color to show the darkling hiding, and the high angle shot is wipping off the dynamism.
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justblah Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
cheers! yeah i just uploaded a new one with a new panel 2 :)

[link]
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:iconanotherrandomaccount:
Way much better.
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justblah Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks :D
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Cave-Shinobi Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Student General Artist
Looking much better than the first entry, indeed! I gotta say, in the first one's last panel, Jackie's arm really irked me :P And, this time, it actually does look like they're in a subway.

Since you're planning on changing the 2nd panel, I'd recommend checking the storyboard again. The Darkling is supposed to be somewhat away from the station (already in the tunnel, I believe), and not right over the firefight. Hope this little reminder helps.
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justblah Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
cheers! and i changed panel 2 :)

[link]
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Cave-Shinobi Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Much better! Gotta say, you work way faster than I do. I just started colouring today :P
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justblah Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
i only worked fast on this cuz i put alot of other stuff aside to be able to do this asap :P

and cheers :D
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SKitFox Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
Much better than the first :)

And I have to say, the demon arm that's bursting through the guy's chest made me happy :P
Good luck!
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justblah Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
hehe cheers :)
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